Last Visit

Now I set out across a minefield,

space having taken all I owned, I’m starting over

from a point where every pebble may explode

beneath my shoe and the flowers blaze up

behind my body as I gasp for air,

although in this world I’ve never known

either flames or dragons or the fury of war

in these lands where the sky was always calm

above the farms and the old schoolhouses,

and the schoolmistress from Angels’ road

has long since packed her bags in which,

under the blouses and wrinkled slips,

slept a handful of notebooks filled with stars —

so why is there suddenly

this thrashing in the leaves,

this breath of fire along the woods

across from which an electric fence

defines the limits of the farmlands

while farther off the lost wild geese

settle softly on the empty runway?

This poem invites you to discover the forms that outrage can take.

  1. This poem is related to a difficult period in Quebec’s history: the decision by the government at the time to seize highly fertile farmland to build a new international airport for Montreal. This airport project required the eviction of several farmers from their family lands. In your opinion, what is the poet Pierre Nepveu trying to express in this poem regarding this project? Do you agree or disagree with him?
     
  2. Identify the words or phrases that illustrate the intensity of the poet's emotion.
     
  3. What connection can you draw to “the lost wild geese" who "settle softly on the empty runway” in the closing lines of the poem?
     
  4. What do you think the phrase “space having taken all I owned” means?
     
  5. Recitation tip: Have you noticed that this poem contains only commas and that there are no other punctuation marks until the very end? The poet thus presents his poem to us in one go, as if it were a single long sentence. It would therefore be interesting to practice reciting this poem in this way, at a fairly quick pace, as if you were feeling anger and indignation.

    Writing Activity

    Our society has no shortage of issues that provoke outrage. Choose an issue that particularly outrages you and channel your outrage into poetry!
Dive In written by
Marie Clark
Bibliographical info

Pierre Nepveu, "Last Visit," from Mirabel. Véhicule Press, 2004. English translation copyright © 2004 by Judith Cowan. Reprinted by permission of Véhicule Press.

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